关于冬天的英语日记

时间:2021-08-31

  我最喜欢冬天 I like winter best.

  【习作要求】

  Write eight or more sentences about the season you like best.

  内容要点

  1.四个季节中任选一个季节。

  2.被选季节的特点(气候、时间、事物、活动等)。

  3.人们在此季节所从事的活动。

  4.作者自己喜爱的活动和感受。

  【参考范文】

  I like winter best. Though it is very cold, it is good for skating. I often go skating on Sundays with my father. When it snows, everything turns white. Trees and houses are covered with thick snow. How beautiful the world looks! My friends and I like to make snowmen. Sometimes we make snowballs and throw them at each other. That's a very interesting game. I like winter holiday very much because the Spring Festival is the happiest time of the year.

  我最喜欢冬天。虽然很冷,但很适合滑冰。我经常在星期天和我父亲一起去滑冰。下雪的时候,一切都变白了。树木和房屋都覆盖着厚厚的积雪。世界看起来多么美丽!我喜欢和我的朋友一起堆雪人。有时我们做雪球扔向对方。这是一个非常有趣的游戏。我非常喜欢寒假,因为春节是一年中最快乐的时光。

  【名师点评】

  这是一篇描写季节的文章,文章难度一般。要求从自己的角度描写季节和感受季节。应注意以下几个问题:

  (1)确定全文的时态。此文一般选用一般现在时。

  (2)除了对季节的描述,一定要有自己的见解,这是得分的重要内容和关键所在。

  作者用流畅的语言描述了冬天的景色。全文意思表达清楚,结构紧密。

  The Winter Holiday 寒假

  I like the winter holiday very much.

  Though it's very short,I can enjoy the Spring Festival.

  I can watch cartoon every day.

  I needn't go to school frepuently.

  Sometimes I can go to play with my friend outside.

  With the festival coming,I can play all the time.

  I can play video game with my brother.

  I am good at playing PC game.

  So I often beats my brother.

  Then more and more relative came to my home.

  We had dinner together.

  It's so lively that I'am very happy.

  But I still have to do my homework.

  我非常喜欢寒假。

  虽然它很短,但我可以享受春节。

  我可以天天看动画片。

  我不需要去学校。

  有时我可以和朋友到外面去玩。

  随着节日的到来,我可以一直玩。

  我可以和哥哥一起玩游戏。

  我擅长打电脑游戏。

  所以我一直赢。

  然后越来越多的亲戚来我家。

  我们一起吃晚餐。

  这是如此生动,我很高兴。

  但我仍然要做我的家庭作业。