范文一:Dear Daniel
I’m very happy that you are coming to Jiangxi to spend your summer holiday. There are similarities and differences between city life and country life. Now China has become better and better. Whether you are living in the city or in the country, you can enjoy keeping fit.But in the city, you can easily go to a supermarket to buy something you like or eat food you love in a restaurant. You can live in a big and tall apartment. When you go to work, you can take cars or buses. In your free time, it is convenient for you to go to the cinema, clubs and park. If you live in a country, you can plant vegetables and rice by yourself instead of buying them. You may build your own beautiful house. You can watch TV at home, or you can ride your motorbike or bicycle to go out to visit your neighbors.In my opinion, I prefer living in the country. As we know, in the country, you enjoy the quiet and beautiful nature, and there is less pollution.I am looking forward to meeting you!Best wishes!Li Hua1) 用现在完成时并且用better and better 说出城市生活和农村生活之间具有相同点的原因。2) 用whether or 这个高级表达引出了城市与农村的共同点。讴歌了中国的巨大变化,升华了主题。3) 这句话描述了城市购物和吃的特点。作者用you like, you love来引导定语从句,使这句话表达精准凝练。4) 用big tall来描述城市住的特点。5) 用when 引导条件状语从句和it is + adj + to do sth来描述城市的出行和娱乐的特点。
范文二:Dear Daniel
I’m very happy that you are coming to Jiangxi to spend your summer holiday. There are similarities and differences between city life and country life. At present, China has changed a lot,. Country life is as good as city life, and people would like to keep fit.Of course, in the city, there are some big supermarkets and restaurants. People can buy comfortable apartments. They usually go out by car or by bus and they can also enjoy themselves in the cinemas, clubs and parks. In the country, people can grow their own vegetables and rice. They can also build their own houses. They usually ride their motorbikes or bicycles to work or school, or visit theeir neighbors, or watch TV at home.For me, I think it is easy and fast to live in the city. For example, if my parent is ill, I can send him or her to the best hospital easily and quickly.I am looking forward to meeting you!Best wishes!Li Hua