写关于我的英语作文
篇一:我的英文写作的经验 举例分析
一、英语写作的特点.
The characteristics of formal writing
1.名词化趋势
I do not eat much.-->I am a light eater.
The clock on the desk reminds me of time.-->I put a clock on the desk as a reminder of time.
We once cried, laughed and disappointed.-->There were moments of tears, moments of laughter, and moments of disappointment.
注意:名词化趋势的句子当然还有动词, 目的是尽量把表达句子中心意思的那个词汇用名词表达.符合英文的习惯.
2.无灵主语(区别于被动语态)
我们中文写作中,习惯以人做主语,而英文则相反,习惯以物做主格.
More and more young students studied further in the past two decades.
-->The past two decades witnessed a growing number of young students for further study.
Looking out of the window, you will have a nice view.
-->A glance out of the window offers you a nice view.
注意: 名词化趋势和无灵主语常常是相结合的.
3.被动语态
这一点大家比较熟悉,不详细讲.比如:
Great efforts should be made to…..
What can not be denied is that….
二、句式的写作:
Main features of English sentences:
1.长短句结合
Love is patient and kind. It is never jealous, boastful, proud or rude. It keeps no record of wrong that others do. It always protects, always fruits, always hopes, and always perseveres. Love never fails.
一般来讲,总结性的句子应当使用短句,而说理的句子应用长句.
2.并列复合句
这种句子属于十分难写的句子,也举一个例子:
He who wants to save his life will lose it, and he who loses his life for me will save it.
3.单一复合句
也就是我们常说的各种从句,不再举例.
三、Variety of sentences:
1. ”-ing & -ed” groups
e.g.
(1)Standing by the riverside, the Master sighed,” May time go on and on like this, never ceasing day and night.”
(2)Reviewing what one has learned and gaining new insights, one is fit to be a teacher.
(3)Compared with the tradition, modernity is more dynamic.
2. ”to do” groups
e.g.
To spend too much time in study is sloth; to use them too much for ornaments is affectation; to make any judgment wholly by their rules is the humor of the scholar.
3. adverb
Simply, amazingly, absurdly, broadly, practically and so on
e.g.
Intelligently applied to daily life, modern technology will surely bring benefits to the well-being of the human race.
4.介词短语
In pursuit of, in spite of (注意平时自己的收集)
e.g.
In pursuit of excellence, ever pushing up the limit, life consists in the hope born of despair.
5.主语从句
e.g.
What China needs is not more morals, but more prisons for politicians.
句子的变化还有 It is self-evident(adj) that…….和There be 这样的句子
6.倒装
(1)将一些否定性含义的副词和短语在句首,用倒装会使句子生色不少.
Never before has such a high standard been achieved.
Hardly had he arrived when she started complaining.
(2)为使描绘更加生动,与介词同形的副词可以移动到句首,而把主语放到谓语后面去.
Following the roar, out rushed a tiger from the bushes.
In came a pretty girl he had never seen before.
四、插入语
插入语可以是一个小词,也可以是一个同谓语的形式.
1.先看一个小技巧:(对there be 句型均有效)
There is, recently, a debate amongst educators that……
通俗的讲,在老外眼里,主语与谓语离的越远,句子的档次越高.
2.插入语后面再接上一个定语从句;
Direct experience, a necessary means to recognize the world, which differs from knowledge acquired from books, is a major step to the cognitive world.
再看几个同谓语从句的例子:
1.Television, one of the most pervasive and persuasive technologies, marked by the rapid growth and drastic change, has a profound impact on people’s lives.
2.Courage, a basic quality that every human being is supposed to possess when facing a dilemma, is highly cherished among young people.
3. Convention, generally accepted practice especially with regard to social behavior, has now been increasingly challenged.
平时要多积累这样的句型,使之变成自己的语言.
Tip:对同谓语的解释尽量宽泛一些,有利于句子的拉长.
对于入语加定语从句开头.
就是说:将题目中的中心词拿出来,进行宽泛的解释.
这一方法对很大一部分的考题都是有效的.
以上就是我的一点总结,希望对大家会有所帮助.
篇二:初二 英语作文 有关 我们的 未来的作文
Our Future
Nobody know what will happen in the future. And predicting the future is difficult.
In the future I think people will have robots in their homes. There are already robots working in factories. And new robots will have many different shaps. People won’t usu money. Everything will be free. Many people will keep many different pets, like snakes or spiders .Kids won’t go to school they will study at home on computer. Books will only be on computers.,not on paper.There will be more computers and more free time. And people will live to be 200 years. In the world,there will be more people and more cars. Maybe there will be less pollution and more tress.The world will be more beautiful.
Our Future
In ten years., people will have robots in their homes. And people won’t use money, everything will be free. Books will only be on computers, not on paper. Kids won’t go to school. They will studying at home on computers. I think there will only be one country. People will live to be 200 years old There will be more people. There will be more free time. And there will be more tress. And there will be more cars. There will be less pollution There will be more tress. And cities will be very big and clean
Our Future
In the future, maybe we’ll be an actor、a doctor、a singer or anther else. So we’ll be able to make a living doing something we love. We’ll live in busy and beautiful city such as Shanghai Beijing and Hangzhou. And I’ll live in Shanghai. Because I went to Shanghai last year and fell in love with it.
Probably we’ll live in an apartment or a building with our parents.If we like pets, we’ll have many different pets, such as rabbits, parrots and dogs. Pets need a lot of love. So we’ll spend a lot of some time with them.
Maybe we’ll travel all over the world. Especially at English-speaking countries such as the United States and Australia, so we’ll be able to improve our English. Predicting the future can be different. But I believe our dream will come true.
Trust self! Where there is a will there is a way!
Our Future
What our life will be like in the future
I think the life of mine will be more modern than now. Every family will have robots. The robots will help us do all the housework. The food will be more healthy. We will have a personal computer. We will be able to do some shopping. The little children won’t go to school . They’ll study at home on computers. People might fly to the moon for holidays.
How wonderful our future will be! I hope my dreams will come true.
Our Future
In the future, we’ll grow up. We will have the different jobs. We’ll be a friendly teacher, an excellent、reporter、a good policeman、a popular singer and so on. Perhaps we’ll work in the companies. But we won’t too tired. Because there will be robots everywhere. Robots will work in the factories. So we will be free sometimes we will have a wonderful time every day. We can go swimming with friends every day. We can also go shopping with friends. We won’t us parper money. We can go to France to take a vacation. We can go to place where we want to go we
will have own computer. We can work on computers.
Work hard, we have to study hard now.
Let’s together!
In The Future
In the future, the world will be more beautiful there will be fewer cars, and there will be less pollution. Cities will be very big and clean. There will be more trees.
People will have robots in their homes. Robots can help people do lots of housework, for example, do the dishes,wash the clothes,cook dinner… And people won’t use money, because everything will be free. Student won’t go to school , the studying at home on computers. People will have a lot of free time.
I think the life will be beautiful in the future. How about you
Our Future
Predicting the future can be difficult. But I think our future will be better than now.
If we plant more tress, the environment will be better There will be less pollution.
Our lives will be better, We will be able to eat healthy food. We will live in big apartments. There will be more robots. They will help people to do lots of simple work. The people will have more free time.
I hope our future can be better.
Our Future
In the future, I think the world will changed a lot.
I think kids won’t go to school, they will study at home on computers.Book will only be on computers, not on paper. People will be more free time. Because robots will help our do something people will have robots in their homes.
I think there will be many tall buildings and wide streets in my hometown. There will be more tress and flowers everywhere. Perhaps many robots will work in factory. There will be less pollution. I think my hometown will become more and more beautiful.
Our Future
Our future will be wonderful. People will have robots in their homes. Kids won’t go to school. They’ll study at home on computers. People won’t use money, everything will be free. There will be more free time. There will be less pollution. There will be more tress. In ten years, we will live in sea. I think there will be more tall buildings. There will be fewer cars and more buses. Maybe one day people will fly to the moon for vacations. My life will be a lot better than this now. Our Future
I think our future will be more beautiful. Do you thinkLet’s talk about our future.
Everyone has their dreams. In the future. I think they will come true. However “no cross, no crown.” We must hard-working now. In the future, I think wo will be a teacher, a doctor, an athlete, a lawyer and so on.
We will have robots in our homes in the future. They help with the housework and do the most unpleasant jobs. And we will work with robots. In the future. Everyone will be friendly. And wo won’t use money. Everything will be free.
“Health is happiness.” So in the future.Everyone will be in good health.
We never know what will happen in the future do weBut I believe the future will be beautiful. Our Future
In the future. I think our world will be more beautiful than now. We will have robots help us to do something.They can do simple jobs over and over again.These robots will look more like human.
In the future I think everything will be free.We will study at home on computers. There will be less pollution and the environment will be better than now.
Predicting the future can be difficult, but I believe our dream will come true in the future. Our Future
We are students now. But we both have ourselves dreams. For example.I want to be a reporter. Because if I became a reporter. I can make a lot of money and. I also can meet lots of interesting people.So I should study Chinese well.My friend-Ann wants to be a singer. Because she thinks it;s a really interesting job.And she wants to be a flight attendant. She should study English well.
We have different dreams. So we believe our future will be happy. And our dreams can be come true.
Our Future
In the future people will have robots in their homes.These robots are just like humans.They help with the house work and do the most unpleasant jobs.
For example there are already robots working in factories.These robots look more like huge arms.The do simple jobs over and over again.People would not like to do such job and would get board.But robots will never get board.