2016年高考英语写作高分秘籍(2)

时间:2021-08-31

  〔修正〕He stopped us half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender.

  〔原文〕We had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced.

  Some told stories. Some played chess.

  〔修正〕After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes and playing chess.注意使用不同长度的句子,要结合使用,不能只用短句或只用长句。

  4.学会使用过渡词。如:

  ①递进: then(然后), besides(还有), furthermore(而且), moreover(此外)等。

  ②转折: however(然而), but(但是), on the contrary (相反), after all(毕竟)等。

  ③总结: finally(最后), at last(最后), in brief(总之), in conclusion(最后)等。

  ④强调: indeed(确实), certainly(一定), surely(确定), above all(尤其)等。

  ⑤对比: in the same way(同样地), just as(正如), on the one hand…on the other hand(一方面……另一方面……)等。

  相似的比较: similarly, in the same manner 相反的比较: on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …,

  5.注意使用词组、习语来代替一些单词,以增加文采。如:

  〔原文〕A new railway is being built in my hometown.

  〔修正〕A new railway is under construction in my hometown.

  6.避免重复使用某一单词或短语。如:

  〔原文〕I like reading while my brother likes watching television.

  〔修正〕I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.

  I like reading while watching television appeals to my brother.  三、 结尾

  1、 All in all, what really matters is, in fact, that……(比如说到和谐社会 All in all, what really matters is, in fact, that we should build our society a harmonious society.)  2、 Therefore, it’s not difficult to draw a conclusion that……

  3、 As a result , we should take effective measures to do sth.(我们必须采取一些有效的措施来做些什么)

  4、 From what has been discussed above , we may conclude that ……

  5、 Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.