关于英语四级写作要点(2)

时间:2021-08-31

  主题句

  通过审题,我们知道了写作的思路。下边我们就谈怎么样写。第一步就是要写主题句。主题句是确保不跑题的前提,只有不跑题才有可能得及格分。写主题句最保险的方法就是把各要求句译成英语。例如上述作文的三段主题句分别为:

  ☆ It is very necessary to be a good university student.(议论体主题句)

  ☆ There are several respects of necessities to be a good university student.(说明体的主题句)

  ☆ What I will do in the future is the following.(描述题的主题句)

  如果要求句是英语就可以把它扩充成主题句,例如这样的一篇做文:

  Good Health

  1) Importance of good health

  2) Ways to keep fit

  3) My own practice

  这样的作文的要求句就可以扩展成主题句。扩展后三段的主题句分别为:

  ☆ It is very important to have good health. (将名词importance变成形容词important)

  ☆ There are four ways to keep fit for me.(用there be句型)

  ☆ My own practices are the following.(采用原词)

  条理

  保证不跑题是写作当中第一重要任务,第二个重要任务就是条理清楚。对于议论文来说,正反面要清楚。对于说明文来说,1、2、3条要清楚,对于描述文要来, 谁干什么要清楚。就拿上例Good Health来说,第一段保持正反面要清楚就应这样写:主题句(It is very important to have good health.,正面(With good health, we can...),反面(Without good health, we can do nothing. We can't do...)

  第二段应当这样写:主题句(There are four ways to keep fit.) 从几方面说明: Firstly, we should have our breakfast in the morning. Second, we should have a nap at noon. Third, sports exercises are necessary in the afternoon. And fourth, we could have a pleasant feeling in the evening by listening to the music....)

  为了使文章更具关于条理性,我们可以用first(ly),second(ly),third(ly)等副词,他们可以使文章的条理性十分突出。作文是主 观性题,要想得高分我们必须把评卷老师考虑进去。评卷老师的时间很短(每份卷子的作文只有一两分钟就要阅完),所以我们在列条条时最好不用:To begin with, ... After that,... And then,... The next,... The following,... At last ...。因为用这样的词语不利于阅卷老师看出你作文的条理性。

  第三段应当这样写:主题句(My own practices are the following.)具体情况(主语为第一人称代词I,与第二段呼应) In the morning, I have my breakfast . At noon, I have a nap. And in the afternoon, I always play football. In the evening, I usually listen to the classic music.

  综上所述,如果我们按以上几节的方法去做,就可以保证及格以上分数。