The cartoon aims at informing us of the significance of adversity. Definitely,No one can deny the importance of adversity. Adversity is conducive to people’s growth and maturity. By facing adversity with confidence and a brave heart, people are more likely to recognize themselves profoundly, bring their potential into full play and accumulate more experiences. To further illustrate the significance of adversity, I would like to take an empirical evidence as a case in point: surveys conducted by some biographers have demonstrated that almost all of the great men and celebrities have built their mansion of success on the bedrock of adversity.
From my perspective, at no time should we underestimate the power of adversity. Furthermore, when coming across adversity, we should not regard it as a obstacle to success; instead, we might as well envision it as a precious chance to improve ourselves, fight against it courageously and acquire wisdom from it. “Adversity breeds success.” An ancient Greek philosopher also once said.
At times we have to announce some event we are going to have. Our announcement, which may be an oral one or a written one, has to be easy to understand.
In general it must contain four W's and one H, which are Who, What, Where, When and How. These are important items to which attention is to be paid. How we arrange these things is entirely up to us.
一、审题
审题的作用在于使你写作不跑题(如果跑题,条理和语言再好,也得不到及格分,甚至0分。)那末审题要审什么呢? 体裁(议论文,说明文,描述文) 审题就是要审作文的题材和体裁。因为什末样的体裁就会用什末样的题材去写。那末体裁包括那些呢?它包括议论文,说明文和描述文。从近些年看,四级作文不是单一的体裁,而是几种体裁的杂合体。
二、根据体裁确定写作方法
我们审题的目的就是根据不同体裁确定不同的写作方法。通过审题,我们可以看出四级作文大都是三段式。如上例第一段为议论体,第二段为说明体,地三段为描述体。而各种文体又不同的.写作方式: 议论文;要有论点和论据,而且往往从正反两方面来论述。例如上面第一段的思路是:做合格大学生,会怎末样;不能做合格的大学生,会怎么样(从反面论述);所以我们要做合格的大学生(结伦)。 说明文:可以从几方面或几条来说明一个问题,就上作文而言,可以从方面(德智体)来说明合格大学生的必要性。 描述文:一“人”为中心描述一个“做”的过程。与上两段相比,本段的主语多为人称代词,他要与第二段相互应进行描述。
三、确定主题句
通过审题,我们知道该如何确定正确的写作思路。下边我们就谈如何些。第一部就是要写主题句。主题句是确保不跑题的前提,只有不跑题才有可得及格分。写主题句最保险的方法就是把中文提纲的各句译成英语。
四、确保文章条理清楚
保证不跑提示写作当中第一任务,第二个重要任务就是要做到条理清楚。对于议论文来说,正反面要清楚,对于说明文来说条理要清楚,对于描述文来说,谁干什么要清楚。就拿上例Good health 来说,第一段保持正反面要清楚救应这样写:正面(With good health ,we can...),反面(Without good health ,we can do nothing .We can’t do...) 为了使文章更具有条理性,我们可以用first(ly) second(ly) third(ly)等副词,他们可以是文章的条例性更加突出。作文是主观题,想得告分就必须引起老师的主意,老师的时间很短(每篇作文只有一两分钟就要阅完),所以我们在列调试最好不用: To be with,... after that ,...And then, ... The next , ... The following , ... As last ... 。因为用这样的词语不利于老师看出你作文的条理性。
五、符合字数要求
考生一般都希望作文达到字数而又不至于写得太多,因为写得太多一方面暴露自己语言上的弱点,另一方面又会占用过多的时间。写得太多还易跑题,一个有效的方法就是十二句作文法。 我们知道,四级作文都是三段式。我们算一下,如果我们在每一段中写上四句,即主题句加两三句扩展句和一个结论句就可以了。这样全篇在十二句左右,每一句十多个词,就又120-150个字。大家可以试图找一些作文题练一练。
Remember last year, my aunt invited me to her home, so my mother took me to a clean, civilized and developed city - Shenzhen, Shenzhen Park composition. Second days to arrive, it is Sunday, my aunt took me to Shenzhen Park, at a glance, that this is a green park, I feel excited and went in. As soon as I entered the park, all my eyes were occupied by green. My aunt asked me to play by myself, so I decided to enjoy the beauty of nature by myself. In the broad lawn, there are many people flying kites, every kind of kite in the clear sky dance, a lot of people playing the game, from time to time bursts of song and laughter, some people at the picnic, and then look back, there is a beautiful lake nearby, around covered with tall there are flowers and trees, the breeze blowing, riotous with colour, the lake Dangqi waves of water water from time to time, small fish like a naughty child, fall over each other to jump, look carefully, there are many small goldfish, grass carp looks very strange, I can not say the name of the fish, they jumped out of the water for a while sink to the bottom, like a lovely elf, the fourth grade primary school composition "Shenzhen park.". I continue to walk up the hill, and soon came to the four corners of the hillside Pavilion, I stood on the high Pavilion and overlooking the East is clear artificial lake, the west is the magnificent Shenzhen Hotel, look at the four stout Pavilion in the pillars, above are carved dragon and Phoenix four, tiger, Xuanwu monster pattern, looked up, the pavilion was suspended above a small bell, I easily picked up a small stone, gently throw stones into a small bell, issued a ringing sound, the sound is pleasant, I totally intoxicated in nature's embrace in. How time flies, it is late, my aunt came to me, we slowly across the lawn, unable to part to leave Park, leave this beautiful green world. But for a long time, the view of the Shenzhen park has been haunting my mind.
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