英语作文(2)
时间：2021-08-31英语作文 篇2
绝大多数的英语学习者，一想到写英语作文，就会头“大”。他们常常苦思冥想，然后草草而就，只求按时“交差”，别的就顾不上了。这种状态下炮制出来的“大作”，其质量可想而知。
对初学者而言，一篇英语作文的过程，至少应该包括两个阶段，“写”与“作”。
所谓“写”的过程应该与中文写作没有很大区别，无非是扣题，构思，表述。惟一要特别注意的是，我们写英语作文时，一般要求的字数比较少，所以我们在文章的结构上更须注意突出重点，集中火力。在非重点部分，不要随便发挥，而应该尽量直奔主题。以本次征文比赛为例，题目是The English Teacher I Admire Most，那么文章的重点应该是讲述why I admire him/her，what is so special about him/her，what I see in him/her，what has made him/her such a wonderful teacher等等，你可以状貌，但主要应该是“写神”，状貌应该简短，应该只起铺垫的作用。写这篇文章当然离不开叙事，全文可能叙述一件或多件事，那么这一件或多件事各自所占的分量应该有分寸，使整篇文章保持平衡。叙事时应该直奔主旨。英语写作的传统非常注重所谓的topic sentence——能够统摄全文或者全段的句子。这个句子最好出现在文章的开头，然后在文章的结尾处用不同的表述呼应这个句子。例如，有一篇应征例文的第一句是这样的：She takes us into the magical English world。这就是一个非常有力的topic sentence。这一个句子就足可吸引读者，让读者相信作者心中对她确实有一种毫无保留甚或“五体投地”的admiration，接下来就会有兴趣了解她究竟有怎样的magic power，让学生如此着迷。这篇文章的结句是her charisma(魅力) is unbelievable，非常有力度，charisma与unbelievable两个词巧妙地呼应了magic这个词。文章需要topic sentence，每个段落最好也要有这样非常powerful的topic sentence。构思完成以后，就是落笔表述的过程。这个过程应该迅速，最好能够一气呼成，不要过多地顾忌是否犯了语法错误，或者表述是否清楚。不要犹犹豫豫，一步三回头，因为在完成了
“写”以后，你还有一个“作”的过程。所谓“作”，就是“精雕细作”。英语初学者常常觉得自己“眼高手低”，想表述的意思难以成文，本来很精致的“意”却表现为颇为笨拙的“文”。这当然与我们掌握的词汇有限相关。但是，我们有限的词汇与表达，经过适当的调度与搭配，还是可以“作”出好文章来的。
我们在写完初稿以后，不妨让自己的好友读一下，看看他是否明白文章的每一个句子。因为作者自己常常把想到而没有表述出来的信息也read into the article，因此不容易发现表述不清的问题。
处理完了表述问题以后，就进入“深加工”阶段。英语写作最强调韵律感，即使是高深的学术文章，读起来常常也会很有“乐感”。这种“乐感”主要来自于句子结构的变化与组合。简而言之，就是长短结合，错落有致。英语的句子结构变化比较多，但我们在写作时受汉语的影响很深，写出的句子常常整齐划一，缺少变化。我们在加工时，就要有意地想：某几个简单句能加工成一个复合句或者复杂句；我们的每一个句子的主语是否都是“人”(从头到尾都是he或者we)，是否可以用一个抽象名词或者一个ing结构来充当其中某些句子的主语，以此构成主语的变化；在一个“意群”中，是否每个句子都是以主语开始；是否每个句子的谓语动词都是简单的一个动词，能否把其中的某一个或几个改成词组；能否构成一个又一个“短句+长句+短句”的意群组合；对于每一个表述，都可以想一下，这种表述是否太中文化，英语是否有更简单的表达。
某个大诗人曾经说过：诗是“写”出来的，而不应该是“作”出来的。但对我们英语初学者而言，在练习时，还是应该一次又一次地、有意识地经历这样的“作”的过程。“作”多了，方能在“临战”时潇洒地“写”。
英语作文 篇3
China, once a state of ceremonies.Five thousand years of civilization, let us be proud of it.However, today's China, these four words can play from a state of ceremonies?
In September 7th this year, Sichuan airlines from Saipan flight to Shanghai, because the two men Chinese melee, resulting in two friends to join the ranks of the fight, seriously disrupting the order of flight.Coincidentally, a few days after the incident, the flight from Zurich to Beijing of the Swiss Air, and two passengers in China clashes occurred, forced the plane to return to flight after six hours, has brought the enormous economic loss and inconvenience to other passengers and airlines.
What's the cause of the conflict?Only because of the back of the chair.It is precisely because the reasons are too simple, it makes people feel incredible.A small problem can lead to a world media brawl, and many people will not be happy to accept it.What's wrong with Chinese people?Step back a true humility as boundless as the sea and sky, it is so difficult to do?Isn't it a shame for all Chinese people to have two similar incidents in a week?This country could not match on a state of ceremonies?
For the disabled, also is one of the basic etiquette, but now, who can do these increasingly reduced.See the old man fell and stand for fear of blackmail, in order to comfort their reluctance to give up their seats for disabled people, even lose the courage to scold the thief.This country could not match on a state of ceremonies?
Behind these gloomy negative news, there are still many touching stories.The most beautiful teacher in Zhang Lili, who died when he was in order to protect the students, grinding wheels to the legs; the most beautiful driver Wu Bin, in the high-speed flying foreign body was shot in the abdomen after completion of a series of safety measures in pain, ensure all the safety of passengers, they lost the life of these people tears trickling down cheeks deeds, it is a state of ceremonies should appear.
英语作文 篇4
【摘要】对于写作，每个同学都有自己的问题和疑惑，写作的分数看似难拿，其实也并非如此。下面，与大家一起分享一下写作文的基本技巧。
临近考研，英语的学习重点越来越明显：1、阅读;2、写作。对于写作，每个考生都有自己的问题和疑惑，大家在下笔时大胆写，不要不好意思，一定要在第一时间解决。
一、考研是目的性很强的考试，所以每一部分都是有标准的。那写作部分大家一定达到几方面的要求：
1、把握文章中心。作文是出题组想通过一幅图片或一个表格来体现我们对于某个现象，某种行为的理解以及解决之道。所以，文章的中心是首先需要大家谨慎以待的。偏离中心你的作文就是去了斗争资格。
2、文章脉络清晰。中心论点阐述完，需要论据进行支撑。论据部分要清晰明确，不是半包围或全包围的结构;且论据要有明确的分析角度，并不是一件事没完没了的论述。最后，衔接自然，清晰可见。
3、其次，语言是文章的眼睛，透过眼睛可以看到你灵魂。那作文透过词汇可以看到各位的知识水平和语言的驾驭能力。所以，词汇这部分一定要多多积累，争取文章妙语横生，勇夺高分。
二、那我们以一篇文章为例写一篇范文，如下：
范文：
With the improved living standard, residents in an increasing number are fond of browsing the internet for shopping rather than wandering in the supermarkets just as the picture depicts. From what is shown, we can clearly notice the expenditure in online shopping rockets rapidly from...in... to...in...
There is no denying that the following factors should account for this phenomenon. To begin with, the updating process of science and technology makes it possible for consumers have various commodities with less money but with the same quality as those in the physical stores. And to be specifically speaking, as the ever-growing stress puts on our shoulders, we do not have so much leisure time, it is a time-saving process rather than a time-wasting one. And also, it can be defined as a course for relaxing and refreshing ourselves from our daily incidents.
It is a typical trait of the development of our society and economy, but on the other hand, it may bring about many potential damages to our physical industries. Therefore, effective measures should be set up and taken if necessary from the whole community.
文章需要不断的磨合，不断的修改，才会渐入正轨，看起来才是考研的文章。文章一定要深入浅出，让别人读起来朗朗上口。所以，没必要写太多的从句，非谓语动词等等。比如说小作文部分，三五个从句，三无个短语就足够用了。所以大家，要知道取舍之道，以免画蛇添足。
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