满分作文二

　　Dear Editor,

　　As a student reader, I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house.

　　In my eyes, these books have a lot of advantages. To begin with, there are such a wide variety of topics in the books that they can satisfy students’ curiosity better. In addition, the pictures in the textbooks are very interesting and attractive. Not only can they draw students’ attention, but they can also arouse our interest in learning English. In short, we have benefited a lot from these books.

　　However, in my opinion, there are still some shortcomings in the textbooks. We find some words are a bit difficult to remember. Therefore, I suggest that you can make them easier to understand.

　　Best regards,

　　Li Hua

　　亲爱的编辑，

　　作为学生的读者，我写了一个关于你家出版的英语教材的作文。

　　在我的眼里，这些书有很多优点。首先，他们可以更好地满足学生的好奇心，有这样一个各种各样的主题的书籍。此外，在教科书中的图片是非常有趣和有吸引力的。他们不仅能吸引学生的注意力，而且能激发我们学习英语的兴趣。总之，我们从这些书中受益匪浅。

　　然而，在我看来，教科书中仍有一些不足之处。我们发现有些话是有点难以记住。因此，我建议你可以让他们更容易理解。

　　最好的问候，

　　李华

　　五：网上交友make friends on the Internet

　　假设你是李华，在互联网上看到英国高中生David登的一则启事 ：希望结识一位中国朋友，以便学习中国的语言、文化。请你以李华的名义用英文给David发一封电子邮件，主要内容包括：

　　(1)你怎样得知David的愿望;

　　(2)你愿意成为他的朋友;

　　(3)你打算如何帮助他;

　　(4)你盼望他的回复。

　　注意：(1)电子邮件的格式已为你写好，不计入总词数;(2)词数：100左右。

　　Dear David,

　　I've learned__________________________________________________________

　　___________________________________________________________________

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Hua

　　【猜题理由】交友话题为学生熟知，也符合当前对学生的情感教育方向。利用此话题加强学生英语交际能力的培养，较好地体现了"语境生活化、任务真实性、行为个性化"的设计特点。

　　【构思点拨】该命题属于应用文，需符合电子邮件的格式要求。在写作过程中要抓住要点提示，做到不遗漏、不重复，并注意保持书信语言的简洁性和精炼性。

　　【参考范文】

　　Dear David,

　　I've learned it from the Internet that you want to make a Chinese friend so as to learn the Chinese language and culture. I'm glad that you show such great interest in China and I would like to be your friend.

　　I will try my best to write to you as often as possible to introduce you the Chinese culture. When you have an opportunity to come to China, I'll teach you how to speak Chinese and show you around some famous historical places of interest. Anyway, I am going to help you as much as I can. How do you think?

　　I'm looking forward to your reply .邀请信六 An Invitation

　　An Invitation

　　May 10, 2012

　　Dear Blake,

　　Mrs. White will soon leave for the United States and we will held a farewell party for her which takes place from 6:00 p.m. to 7:30 p.m. on Friday, May 20, 2012 at the School Club. I am very pleased to invite you toparticipatein the farewell party. Another two foreign teachers you know, Mr. Frazer and Miss Gree are also invited. Please join us to say goodbye to Mrs. White. You are hoped to arrive at 5:50 p.m. I look forward to see you on May 20.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Yan Yang

　　邀请信

　　2012年5月10日

　　亲爱的布莱克：

　　怀特老师很快就去美国了，我们将为她举行一次欢送会，时间是星期五晚上六点到七点半，地点是学校俱乐部。我很高兴邀请你来参加欢送会。我们还邀请了你认识的另外两位外教Frazer和Gree。希望你能和我们一起送别怀特老师。希望你5点50能到这。期待那天能看到你。

　　晏阳