SAT作文常见错误归纳

时间:2021-08-31

  在SAT作文中,很多考生在语法方面的失误和表义上的含糊不清直接导致了语言质量的下降,甚至很多时候无法让考官理解他们所要表达的意思,因而使作文停留在6分-8分的阶段而无法更进一步。句子结构,也因此成为很多同学的“痛脚”之一。在本文中会根据同学的实战演练,对作文中经常出现的各种错误加以概括和总结,使同学们更好的了解语法和表义方面一些频繁出现的错误,从而更好的改善自己作文的语言质量。

  错误一:句子结构冗余或缺失

  很多同学虽然对于基本的句子结构条条是道,娓娓道来,真正应用在自己所写的长句中的时候,却容易顾此失彼,错误百出。很多时候是因为过于关注句子的长度和用词的难度,却忽略了基本的主谓宾搭配已经歪曲了。

  Steve Jobs, the brilliant and talented leader of Apple, who wins the battle in harsh consumer market with great creativity.

  Thomas Edison who was one of the greatest inventors in the history. In his life, the most famous and important invention was electric light.

  这两个句子反映了7分左右的考生最常见的语法错误。因为用比较长的同位语或定语从句来修饰句子的主语,却忘记了这个句子其实已经没有谓语动词了。

  According to those two examples, that’s why I agree that those people who are confident and optimistic can change their lives easily.

  这个句子则是出现了另一个极端,according to…., that is why…表义过于重复。完全可以去掉其中的一个结构。

  错误二:连词的误用

  很多同学都明白,在基本的语法规则里,两个句子之间一定要有连词来过渡和衔接。但是真正动笔的时候,却仍然是一“逗”到底,完全不考虑是否应该根据句意间的关系来添加连词或者把副词和介词混用为连词。

  Despite many other company are capable of producing such ordinary goods, Steve Jobs uses creativity to distinguish his products and apple from the crowd.

  Despite和in spite of类似,都是介词,后面应该接sth或doing sth,而不能够引导一个完整的句子。

  The reason is because confidence and optimism can give people stimulation and impel them to achieve their goals.

  Because是引导状语从句的连词,而不能够放在be动词后面,引导一个表语从句。这里应该把because换成that,引导表示陈述语气的表语从句。

  However, during the time of inventing it, Edison had thousands of failures, but he never complained about that.

  这里使用了太多的转折连词。However表示和上文形成语气上的转折,而后面一句又用了but,语气过于跳跃,让读者很难跟得上作者的思路。