考研英语作文常见错误分析(3)

时间:2021-08-31

五、断句方面的错误

  一句句子没有结束,又开始新的一句,结果造成句子结构不全,这就成为断句。

  误:TV becomes an important part in our daily life. Because we cannot live without it.

  正:TV becomes an important part in our daily life,because we cannot live without it.

  【说明】以because,since,if等引导的从句是不能独立成句的,只能依属于主句,所以不能写成另一句。

六、连词方面的错误

  作文中缺少必要的连词,或错用连词的现象也比较普遍。

  误:One should improve his English,one should overcome difficulties in studies.

  正:If one wants to improve his English,he should overcome difficulties in studies.

  【说明】学生在写作中往往意识不到连词的重要,不善于使用连词和连接副词来明确标示出因果关系、转折关系、递进关系等。

七、搭配方面的错误

  学生作文中用词搭配方面的错误也占有较大比例。曾经在一次六级作文阅卷中,近千篇作文在表达上海交通越来越拥挤这个意思时,几乎没有一篇用 heavier,大多数人用的是The traffic in Shanghai is getting more and more crowded,而traffic是不能与crowded搭配的。

  1、误:However the speed of a car is much faster than that of a bicycle.

  正:However the speed of a car is much higher than that of a bicycle.

  【说明】speed只能和high,low,good,top,normal,fantastic,moderate,surprising等搭配,不能与fast,quick,slow搭配。但可以这样说A car is much faster in speed than a bicycle.

  2、误:In the past the price of milk was so expensive that most families could not afford it.

  正:In the past the price of milk was so high that most families couldnt afford it.

  【说明】price只和high,low,inflated,moderate,minimum,original,popular,prevailing,published,reduced,reasonable等搭配,不能与expensive,cheap搭配,但可以说In the past,milk was so expensive that most families couldnt afford it.

  由此可见,要提高对词语搭配的驾驭能力,除了要在平时的阅读过程中多积累,还需要克服中文中诸如速度快、价格贵、学习知识、人减少等搭配的影响,避免写出look book或see book这样的笑话来。八、误用方面

  学生作文中对词语的误用也相当普遍,误用词语不仅不能准确地表达作者的意思,而且也会闹出笑话。

  1、误:With the industrious development,there is a great need for different kinds of energy.

  正:With the industrial development,there is a great need for different kinds of energy.

  2、误:Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which effect our daily life.

  正:Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which affect our daily life.

  【说明】以上错句都是因为对形容词的辨析不清而造成的。Industrious是勤劳的,工业上的应为industrial。effect一般用作名词,其动词形式表示产生、实现,而这里的意思是影响,应换成affect。

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