初一期末写作指导

　　一basic rules (写作规则)

　　1.信息提取—找全信息2.信息加工–- 重组信息 （适当的加入细节）

　　3.列提纲—确定句式，关联词，过渡词，较高级的句型和词汇

　　方法一:善用词汇 甚至善用高级词汇

　　A.They listened to the music on the beach.

　　B .They enjoyed the music on the beach.

　　A I wish you can help me.

　　B I’m looking forward to your help.

　　A They arrived early.

　　B They arrived as early as they could.

　　A His dog was saved at last. He was very surprised.

　　B To his surprise, his dog was saved at last.

　　A I think learning English is interesting.

　　B I find it really fun to learn English .

　　A We should protect the environment.

　　B It’s our duty to protect the environment.

　　方法二:活用多种句型

　　A She is very young.

　　She can’t carry the heavy box.

　　B She is too young to carry the heavy box.

　　C She is so young that she can’t carry the …

　　D She is not old enough to carry the…

　　表示并列或递进: and, as well as, both…and, what’s more not only…but also, neither…nor

　　2.表示选择: or, either…or

　　3.表示转折: but,however,although hough,after all,anyway

　　4.表示因果: because, so, therefore,since,for,as a result

　　5.表示条件: if , unless

　　6.表示对比: instead, not…but, while, in the same way, on the one hand…on the other hand

　　7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words,to tell the truth

　　8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end

　　9.表示强调: also, besides, especially, actually, in fact