外企应聘英文简历点评

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Balance Sheet基本方法
    选择要应聘的工作后，必须看清招聘广告上所列出的每项要求，再将自己的学历、能力与兴趣逐一与之比较，作一张balance sheet.
    例如，一则关于marketing management trainee和job requirement是这样写的：
    We are looking for a competent person to fill the captioned position：
    -University graduate major in Marketing Management. Prepared to develop career in the commercial field
    -Outgoing personality
    -Able to communicate at different levels
    -Good knowledge of PC operations
    -Proficiency in written and spoken English/Mandarin
    那么你相应地考虑自己的qualification的`选择和表述，就可以这样写（与上列各项对应）：
    -University graduate with major in Marketing
    -Having actively participated in Business clubs activities and learned accounting and management
    -Good in communication with people and like a lot of out door activities, know how to tackle with people from all walks of life
    -Skillful in operating Words, Excel, Lotus1-2-3, etc
    -Fluent in English and Mandarin
    这个方法的好处是可让求职者清楚了解该职位是否适合自己，而本身资料又是否切合要求，而且，明白了各项要求后，就可依据每一点在履历表上重点提出自己在该方面的强项。突出卖点(selling point)，将之放在最吸引人的地方，使招聘者一眼可见，有利于present自己。

Work experience工作经验的陈述
    工作经验是resume中令招聘者相当感兴趣的一项内容，善加措词是不可忽视的要务。
    刚毕业，何来工作经验？其实，读书时的兼职、实习、实践，以至所曾参加的一些课外活动－协助出版学校刊物、举办活动，展览、宣传……都可算是工作经验、不过，表达起来要有针对性地展开，列出那些与所找工作有关的项目重点介绍，必要时更可使用summary的方式，以给招聘者深入的了解。
    下面的写法显得相当简陋呆板：
    1996/7-1996/8 General Clerk, IBM
    1995/7-1995/8 Account clerks, Manley Toy Trading
    1994/6-1994/8Salesgirl, Esprit.
    倘能换一种表述如：
    Three years of job experience in different positions have offered me opportunities to understand different job aspects.
    -As a General Clerk (IBM),Accounts clerk (Manley Toy Trading), I have learned how to prepare purchasing orders,place orders, handle accounting matter, check voucher,… also (Salesgirl, Esprit) developing the technique of selling, serving and stocking.