英语作文：M best friend

　　M best friend is Zhang Xuang . She is clse friend.

　　She has gt a white face. Her face is as beautiful as a flwer. She has gt a pair f light and big ees. There is a sall and lvel nse in the iddle f her face. And there is a pin and sall uth under her nse.

　　She lies siling ver uch. When she is siling, （When she was siling,） her ees ls lie tw sall bat. She is gd at singing and dancing. But her favurite hbb is travelling. S a I. We have the sae hbb.（Our favurite hbb is s sae.）

　　Last ear, we went t Xi’an with ur parents. Xi’an is a beautiful cit. It has a heav and lng histr. There are lts f beautiful places. We plaed ver happ. In the evening, we watched TV、plaed cputer gaes (plaed n cputer )and read lts f interesting bs in the htel.

　　The next da (Trrw) we went t the st faus place—the Terractta Warrirs (the terractta warrirs.)

　　There were an peple visiting the Terractta Warrirs. The are fr different cuntries. such as the U, Aerica, apan, Russia……

　　(There are an peple visited the terractta warrirs. The were fr different cuntries. The are English、Aerican apanese、Russian……)

　　Zhang Xuang and I taled with the freigners ver friendl. ( Zhang Xuang and I taled t English and Aerican ver friendl.)And we t pictures with the. We had a gd and unfrgettable tie （in ）there.

　　When she is plaing with e, she is ver happ! S （a） d I.

　　This is best friend—Zhang Xuang. D u lie her?

　　翻译：我的好朋友

　　我的好朋友是张徐洋,她是我的密友。她面庞白皙，就像一朵美丽的花朵。她有一双明亮的大眼睛，一个小巧可爱的鼻子占据了脸蛋的正中央，在她的鼻子下面，有一张粉红色的小嘴巴。

　　她十分爱笑，当她微笑的时候，她的眼睛就像两只弯弯的小船，她非常擅长于唱歌和跳舞。但是她最喜欢的爱好是旅游。我也爱旅游，我们的爱好是如此一致。

　　去年，我们一起去西安旅游，西安是一个美丽的城市，它有一段厚重而悠久的历史。这里有许多美丽的景点。我们玩得很开心。在晚上，我们在宾馆里看电视、上网冲浪，还看了许多有趣的图书。

　　第二天一大早，我们就去最著名的景点——兵马俑参观。

　　有许多人都来参观兵马俑，他们来自不同的国家。有英国人、美国人、日本人、俄罗斯人……

　　我和张徐洋与英国人与美国人进行了非常愉快的交谈。我们还和他们合影留念。我们非常高兴.当我们在一起玩的时候，她很开心，我也一样。

　　这就是我的好朋友——张徐洋，你喜欢她吗？

　　自评：这是我在校讯通孙老师的指导下，把英语作文又修改了一番，蓝色字体是修改前需要删除掉的，红色字体是修改后的。希望大家多多指导，谢谢！请大家一人吃一个冰激凌，祝大家清凉一夏哦！